I once read "The key to great writing is knowing when to stop." I'm not sure if I ended my story quite right. I like the idea of how I ended it, but I don't know if I said it right. So I'm asking you, my faithful readers, how you liked it. Also I would appreciate any questions I may have left unanswered. You should know that I edited the first chapter quite a bit. The financial issue is less important, and the voice in his head and the homeless man have disappeared. I also decided that the voice in his head in the second chapter was not relevant, so *poof* no more conversations in his head.
So please, be honest and give any constructive criticism you can.
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